Students' Sentences

Tenth Grade

Saadat Abad High School Last year

نیما دانشور

I saw an injured tiger in the zoo.

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Resalat High School Last year

ترنم کاظمی

Tigers are big cats with black lines on their skin.

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Resalat High School Last year

زهرا هاشمی

I will be upset if I hear tigers are dying out.

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Resalat High School Last year

اسرا خوش پی

Iranian tiger is not being protected.

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Resalat High School Last year

سارا شمس

The Iranian tiger died out 73 years ago.

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Saadat Abad High School Last year

آرین ایرانی

Tigers are dangerous be careful around them.

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Tigers are dangerous"." "Be" careful "(when you are)" around them.
Resalat High School Last year

نگین آقا میر محمد علی

Tiger:Tiger is one of the fastest animals.

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Felestin High School Last year

هیلا تفقدی

Tigers are not friendly to humans.

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Resalat High School Last year

ياسمن درخشان

All of the tigers are dangerous.

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Resalat High School Last year

ريحانه امن پور

Tiger is a wild animal.

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Resalat High School Last year

فریماه رامشینی

Tiger is a member of cat family which has some black an yellow lines.

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Resalat Secondary School Last year

نسيم فرشادفر

I don't love tigers.

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Resalat High School Last year

هدیه سلیمانی افشاری

Tiger is a kind of wild animal with black lines.

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Hafez High School Last year

سبحان کامیابی

In my opinion tiger is one of the most beautiful animal

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In my opinion tiger is one of the most beautiful animals.
Resalat Secondary School Last year

ریحانه شیخ علیا

Tigers are beautiful striped animals.

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Saadat Abad High School Last year

کسری مهاجر

Tiger is one of the endangered animals.

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Hafez High School Last year

پارسا علی محمدی

In feliformia , just tigers like water.

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It is correct. However, to make it much clearer, you may use 'among' instead on 'in'.
Moreover, you can change the word 'just' with 'only. 
So we would have: 
Among feliformia, only tigers like water.
And thank you Parsa. I didn't know that.
Hafez High School Last year

امیر پارسا محمد بابایی

Rather than live a hundred years as a rabbit, live one day as a tiger.

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Rather than "living" a hundred years as a rabbit, live one day as a tiger.
Resalat High School Last year

نرگس عطایی

Tigers are wild animals.

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Resalat High School Last year

مهنا مقیمی منش

The Iranian tiger died out 63 years ago.

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