Students' Sentences

Tenth Grade

Hafez High School 10 months ago

علی اخوان

Iranian tigers died out about fifty years ago.

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Hafez High School 10 months ago

پارسا تقی دخت رهقی

Dodo is funny bird but dodos died out in many years ago

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Dodo is "a" funny bird but dodos died out in many years ago.
Seyed Khandan High School 10 months ago

متین بابایی

Persian lion died out 80 years ago.!

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Persian lion died out 80 years ago.
Resalat High School 10 months ago

سارا شمس

Iranian lion died out years ago.

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Resalat High School 10 months ago

زهرا هاشمی

Dinosaurs died out many years ago.

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Resalat High School 10 months ago

نگار مهریار

Iranian lion has died out many years ago

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Iranian lion has died out many years ago"."
Resalat High School 10 months ago

سارا شمس

The number of animals which died out is more than the alive ones.

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Seyed Khandan High School 11 months ago

علیرضا عا لقیان

This animal died out about 70 years ago.

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Resalat High School 11 months ago

نگین آقا میر محمد علی

Die out:Don't let them die out because of some foolish things that people do.

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Felestin High School 11 months ago

هیلا تفقدی

all animals will die out one by one if we keep destroying their habitats.

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If once more you forget to capitalize the first letter, I'll give you a red!
Resalat High School 11 months ago

زهرا باقرى

Iranian lion died out years ago.

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Resalat High School 11 months ago

ياسمن درخشان

Some animals died out last year.

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Resalat High School 11 months ago

فاطمه فرامرزى

Dinosaurs died out many years ago.

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Resalat High School 11 months ago

آيدا عبدلى

Some animals are in danger of dying out.

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Resalat High School 11 months ago

رکسانا کریم اصفهانی

Die out: Persian lion died out few years ago.

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Saadat Abad High School 11 months ago

آرین نوابی

We have to do something to stop animals from dying out.

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Resalat High School 11 months ago

صبا ظرفچی شیرازی

The number of animals which died out is more than the alive ones.

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Some adjectives are used only after linking verbs. 'Alive' is one of them. They don't use it before nouns. So, here you may say:
- The number of animals which died out is more than the ones which are alive.
Or we can omit 'which are' to make it shorter:
- The number of animals which died out is more than the ones alive.
Thank you Saba. You taught us a good point. 
Felestin High School 11 months ago

رومینا مجدی

The Asian elephant died out.

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Felestin High School 11 months ago

هیلا تفقدی

Iranian tiger died out many years ago.

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Felestin High School 11 months ago

ملیکا ابراهیمی آذر

The hunters hunted Iranian lions so they died out.

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